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| Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 383 From: Darkness My Camera: must take pretty pictures | rooftop
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| Junior Member Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 25 From: Hillsboro, Or My Camera: Canon Rebel Xsi |
for me its a little too much motion in the clouds, also in the lower background theres 'stationary' clouds. over all I like it though...Just too bad you don't have a creepy guy standing in one of the left building windows staring at you lol. |
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| Senior Member Joined: May 2008 Posts: 219 From: Mountlake Terrace My Camera: Canon 5d mark II & 40d |
I like this one, the clouds give it a cool effect. What was your shutter speed on it?
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| Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 383 From: Darkness My Camera: must take pretty pictures |
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| Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 365 From: Under a roof My Camera: Canon S5 and 50D |
The intended effect is cool in theory, but I think this photo would have been best if taken somewhere else. The "streaking" of the clouds and the buildings are two different subjects and make the photo seem chaotic, especially since each takes up a large amount of the image. |
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| Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 383 From: Darkness My Camera: must take pretty pictures |
and what (or where) would you suggest?
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| Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 365 From: Under a roof My Camera: Canon S5 and 50D | An entire cityscape along the lower portion, but only taking up ~20% of the frame. Or possibly a shot that is entirely sky. Or even looking straight up through a canopy of tree tops with a hole in the center and the clouds streaking past. Just a few thoughts. |
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| Junior Member Joined: Jun 2009 Posts: 12 From: Mill Creek My Camera: Nikon D300, Nikon D80, Nikon D40, Nikon L18 |
wider angle might have helped, but I like the concept....a lot
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