critique this please

Killermondodude · 05-26-2008, 02:24 AM

How would you improve this pick (Not just what youd do but how youd do it)

Killermondodude · 05-26-2008, 02:28 AM

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Metonymy · 05-26-2008, 02:28 AM

I'm not sure how I'd do it any different way, but nothing in the photo seems to be in focus? Maybe the far away orange clouds?

The colors are great. Seems like mother nature was showing off for you.

Killermondodude · 05-26-2008, 02:33 AM

sorry thats the one i played with here is the original not much different but still different

JayT · 05-26-2008, 08:25 AM

do you have the raw version?

Killermondodude · 05-26-2008, 11:03 AM

Ill Send it to you JT

JayT · 05-26-2008, 08:54 PM

this would be my take on it, but photography is so subjective.

Metonymy · 05-26-2008, 09:02 PM

Talk about a HUGE difference!!!

balut · 05-26-2008, 10:16 PM

is that hdr?

JayT · 05-26-2008, 10:42 PM

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Originally Posted by balut

is that hdr?

no

jezterr · 05-26-2008, 10:58 PM

see if you like it with the contrast turned up a bit, to bring out the highlights better, and push back the landscape. jayt did it a little bit, but see what it looks like contrasted a little more.

colorwise, i think you can take it in any direction, and it would be fine. 'cept maybe green.

balut · 05-26-2008, 11:20 PM

nice that looks great nice and colorful and sharp.
and its not even hdr

05-26-2008, 02:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
Killermondodude Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 355 Blog Entries: 1 From: Camano Island My Camera: Canon 20d	critique this please How would you improve this pick (Not just what youd do but how youd do it) Last edited by Killermondodude; 05-26-2008 at 02:32 AM..

05-26-2008, 08:25 AM	#5 (permalink)
JayT Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 184 From: Darkness My Camera: must take pretty pictures	do you have the raw version? __________________ JayTPhotos.com

05-26-2008, 08:54 PM	#7 (permalink)
JayT Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 184 From: Darkness My Camera: must take pretty pictures	this would be my take on it, but photography is so subjective. __________________ JayTPhotos.com

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05-26-2008, 02:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
Killermondodude Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 355 Blog Entries: 1 From: Camano Island My Camera: Canon 20d	Meta Data File name : img264/3537/sunsetac6.jpg File size : 271280 bytes File date : 26-May-2008 02:23:28 Camera make : Canon� Camera model : Canon EOS 20D� Date/Time : 2005:07:31 19:19:03� Resolution : 1280 x 853 Color/bw : Black and white Flash used : No Focal length : 84.0mm (84/1) Exposure time: 0.002 s (1/640) Aperture : f/9.0 ISO equiv. : 800 Exposure bias:42949672.29 (4294967229/100) Exposure : aperture priority (semi-auto) Jpeg process : Unknown Artist : Kevin WIngrove�

05-26-2008, 02:28 AM	#3 (permalink)
Metonymy Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 256 From: Under a roof My Camera: Canon S5 and XTi	I'm not sure how I'd do it any different way, but nothing in the photo seems to be in focus? Maybe the far away orange clouds? The colors are great. Seems like mother nature was showing off for you.

05-26-2008, 02:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
Killermondodude Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 355 Blog Entries: 1 From: Camano Island My Camera: Canon 20d	sorry thats the one i played with here is the original not much different but still different

05-26-2008, 11:03 AM	#6 (permalink)
Killermondodude Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 355 Blog Entries: 1 From: Camano Island My Camera: Canon 20d	Ill Send it to you JT

05-26-2008, 09:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
Metonymy Senior Member Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 256 From: Under a roof My Camera: Canon S5 and XTi	Talk about a HUGE difference!!!

05-26-2008, 10:16 PM	#9 (permalink)
balut Senior Member Joined: May 2008 Posts: 245 From: bellingham, wa My Camera: canon eos 40d	is that hdr?

05-26-2008, 11:20 PM	#12 (permalink)
balut Senior Member Joined: May 2008 Posts: 245 From: bellingham, wa My Camera: canon eos 40d	nice that looks great nice and colorful and sharp. and its not even hdr